AliyahPillage

I really love this poem, I just decided that I would make all spelling and grammar mistakes red so that you could see where they are so I copied the ...

This was a very nice poem, firstly I'd like to say that if there is a coma the next line should not be capitalized and not every line needs punctuation ...

I liked the poem although... and this might just be me.. I didn't really understand the meaning of it, you're probably wondering how someone can like something yet not understand ...

I like the idea of the poem but I don't really like how it didn't rhyme at first until the second stanza and then it didn't much after that I ...

Okay, I loved the poem but like anyone I thought I'd give you some pointers you know things you could improve on and things that you did well. Okay, so ...

I love the meaning of the poem that the person is otherwise alone but I find it very repetitive no one to tease and no one to taunt This was ...

I loved this poem, it was short, but to the point and it made sense. I just don't understand why you used dashes instead of comas, that's the only thing ...

I love this, although I'm not sure if it means that you would have ended twilight right there... I say this with caution for fear of being eaten alive by ...

I thought this was a very nice story, I enjoyed reading it from the very start, Would I have married him? Probably Would I have become a vampire? Maybe. Did ...

I love the poem but I would consider checking the punctuation and every line I noticed started with a capital letter, if there is a coma the line doesn't need ...

First off, it was a lovely poem to read, just a few things to concider She is Blond hair, blue eyesg lossed lips, glistening smile. Straight teeth, pearly white 67 ...

I enjoyed reading your poem, I would consider looking at your punctuation and fixing it. I am just a thrown away one this line made little sense to me, I ...

This was a very nice poem to read, I love how you have dialogue in there as well, this I find it very hard to do. She fell like a ...

I love this poem so much, it reminds me of my friend but not so much as it should, you did a great job on the poem. The happiest memories ...

I like the poem although the 'I, I'm, and I've' should be capital of the time and it's only capitalized, shreds is spelled wrong in the last stanza. how i ...