Alliaaryn5665

So hi, I adore this. While I do have to say I have a problem with the caps, or therefore lack of, I must also mention it doesn't matter to ...

Dearest inkwell, Here goes nothing. I personally believe you got a teensy bit off-topic, or so it seemed. This was okay. I personally love your work, but this seemed almost ...

Hey, Well, good evening. I have to say I like your style. I picked a fabulous time to read this, because at this time I was listening to Slipped Away ...

Bonsoir, While this is very righ and classic, it makes too little of sense at times. At times you should have been more clear. Personally{sp?}, I like the fact that ...

Hello, First things first, I love all of the poem, honestly. I just have one issue and that's the last line. It BOMBS your poem. It's like, 'I'm so pretty ...

Howdy, Soooo many mistakes. I mean all over the place. It was little hard to follow, and at times a bit immature. Don't put "'do it'" put sex. Sex. Not ...

Howdy, First off, I didn't finish this. It was WAY too all over the placce. It felt so forced and scattered, panicked. I guess maybe that was the feel you ...

Howdy, To make this thing perfect, you need to make a gigantic change. THE ENDING. This ending, in a blunt choice of words, stinks. Your poem was so powerful, so ...

Bonsoir, I felt the character's distress when her mom left for her flight. My mom went on a long vacation and never called. As mentioned in an earlier review, I ...

Hi, Haha, nice! One thing: Molly McCoys swore off all other boys at the reasonable age of 24. She forced a small smile as she walked down the aisle and ...

Hi, While I am my agnostic little self, I really liked this. You did amazing. A few things, though: But I was floating on the air. Though the funny feeling ...

Hi, Good job! Though, I do have to say, I don't really like the first paragraph. It wasn't very strong to me. The last line, also, didn't do much for ...

Hi, You could almost see this situation. You did a phenominal. One thing, though: Hugs were just hugs, smiles were just smiles, and hellos were just hellos. Neither one meant ...

Hi, AHHHHH! Nu-uh!!! He remembered her! :D Eeeek! I'm not even the romantic type and this made me keep reading as if it would save my life! Oh my goodness! ...

Hi, OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY! And aww. That's sad. How disappointing for her! It makes a story, though! One nitpick: I cut him off with by pu