AllyGrLxOX

Hello, AllyGrLxOx here again to review! :D I don't have alot of nitpicks! This is wonderful, you're story has captivated me and I must know what happens next! I love ...

Aloha, AllyGrLxOx here for a review as requested! :D Since this is a very lengthy piece I'm not going to be too nitpicky! I'll start by saying that I simply ...

Hello there, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! I'll begin by saying that everything I point out or say is to help you and your writing improve! :) I also haven't ...

You realize I posted mine to counter the first two? Then ladypurple posted that one to counter mine? You also realize you're just prolonging the topic? >.> ^^I think that ...

Hey there! It's AllyGrLxOx here fore a review! Anything I say is said with the upmost intent of bettering your writing and this story! :D I'll start with saying that ...

Hey there, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! :D Fear. It binds, cripples, chokes, and smothers. The weak and the strong, the courageous and the meek all have something to fear. ...

Hey, AllyGrLxOx here! I don't know much about poetry, well practically anything at all! xP So this review will merely be a compliment of your poetry writing skills! This was ...

Aloha, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! :D This definitely shows off it's potential for a great story! So I'm going to be a tad nit-picky and try and point out ...

Hola, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! :D This was very intriguing piece! So let's being the review, Not from something of that she was sure, instead she was the pursuer, ...

Hiya, AllyGrLxOx here for a review!(: I'll being with saying that this was a wonderful piece and would like to congratulate you on having wonderful descriptions! *applauds* I would like ...

Hey, AllyGrLxOx here for a review!(: This was a very enjoyable prologue! I'm anxious to see how the rest of the story unfolds. However I do believe that some more ...

Hey there! AllyGrLxOx is here for a review!(: I just want to begin with saying that anything I say is only to try and better your writing and your style! ...

Hey there! AllyGrLxOx here for a review! :) I enjoyed this piece and am very intrigued with the direction your novel is going in! However you might want to get ...

Hello there, AllyGrLxOx here for a review! Well I'd like to begin by telling you that you have a great storyline so far, however it does seem a tad rushed. ...

This was great! :D except now I realize that in a hundred years or so everyone will have forgotten about me.... -_- lemme know when you have the next part ...