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  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Nightmare's Come

    I must say i thought this poe was quite delightfully violent and filled with gore. I absolutely loved it!!! Teeth fall from one's mouth. Blood oozes from appearing sores. i ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Life

    wow, i'm usally not one for rhyming poems, but this was pretty good. Life is a game, played by all Winners, losers, big and small i think you're right about ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Close Call

    A Close Call Locking the door, I dropped my bag by it, and deposited my keys in the tray on the end table in the corner right beside the door. ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Close Call

    i wrote this story for an english assignment and my teacher loved it. so far everyone who's read it has loved it. i hope you all feel the same. A ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Close Call

    i wrote this story for an english assignment and my teacher loved it. so far everyone who's read it has loved it. i hope you all feel the same. A ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Starlit night

    first of all, i just wanna sayi really liked your poem. it was sweet and very beautiful, and i'm not gonna just point out all of your mistakes. Our love ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: True Sacrafice-chapter 1

    Whoa man!!! this story was freaking crazy!!!! i absolutely loved it!! Finally satisfied with the knots, the guard nods to a slave boy who hands him a long whip and ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Strength

    I decided to take a chance on this poem. I don't kno where it came from, but I knew I wouldn't be able to get it out of mind unless ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Resisting Rhys Chapter 4

    i must say, you did a good job on this. it's awesome. keep writing!!

    Aug 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Resisting Rhys Chapter 3

    i don't give a flying whoop about what these other people say. i thought it was good and can't stop thinking about what ever tragedy you're hiding.

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Delusion

    i like the feel of this poem and flow is totally perfect. your rhyming is spot on and i think was a really good read. I will not beg my ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Clostrophorical: Chapter 9: The Green Eyed Man(Lucas)

    yo man this was totally awesome!!my heart was going hay wire in my chest. i think you should've chosen violet, but that's my opinion. it was really interesting and it ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Paint

    i thought this poem was very interesting and very odd at the same time for some reason. i like the flow you had going. It all fades, sooner or later. ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dance

    i've rea some good poems to day but so far your takes the cake! The music moves me, And I move it, I interpret it, Then I show you how ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Moon's Love Poem

    im here to review tour poem and i nust say it's pretty good. Cosmic sparks of radiance, Showers of light. Gleaming and glowing, Like an endless embrace that made me ...

    Jun 30, 2011


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