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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thunder Pussy

    Super cool! Hahaha what the hell man. sounds like a few of the kids at my school My exact same thought! I really liked it, and I laughed during some ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: the incredibal icecube

    The incredible ice cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Warmth-Seeker

    Hi! This is amazing. I really loved it, and I almost wept when I read the ending. It's just so sad... Any way, I noticed a few nit picks, but ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Angry Valentines Day!

    I'm not very good at reviewing, so bear with me, please. That was pretty good! I really liked it! The character seemed real, and I can see why she hates ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: I Thought I Knew

    Thanks a lot! Yes, the chorus was supposed to be sad, just like you said. As for the second verse, I intentionally used the words "dream" as well as "once" ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: I Thought I Knew

    This song I wrote in the perspective of a girl who realizes that nothing, no one in this world is innocent :shock: , including her loved ones. Hope you enjoy ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Find Out What Grade Level You Write At

    That's cool! Though the results for my latest poem was kind of disappointing... Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 9. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 59 Well, I'll get better with time... Thanks for ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Other Re: How to fling a thing mashing

    You will need: *5 things (any thingy will do!) *half a cup of bling king fling *2 teaspoons of fine crystal mashing ling What to do : 1.Boil 3 things ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Vocab Exercise

    Hey! This exercise I perform nearly every day. This is what to do: First write down a list of verbs, nouns, etc., as many as possible on a piece of ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Research Archives Re: Which prison setting?

    Maybe Arkansas(don't here much from there) Yeah... I thought of that. It's pretty scary, it's where Al Capone went bonkers... Thanks for your opinion! (I also considered underground locations, but ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry

    *googles navel gazing* Oh.

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry

    What is "navel gazing" anyway?

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind

    Thanks a lot! I am a teenager, being fifteen; I'll tell you what people think about being a teen You always think you're right, and when you get it wrong; ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Untitled

    *sigh*. Still no comments.

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Research Archives Re: Which prison setting?

    Which prison setting should I chose for a book I'm planning to write? The top security prison fits the best in: 1. An island in the Bermuda Triangle location (any ...

    Feb 3, 2011


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights