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Re: Luminescence: Part Eight (Read Below) - A Twilight Fanfic
That sounds like a really good idea. I would definitely read it.
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Three - A Twilight Fanfic
Absolutely FANTASTIC!!! This is just so enticing to read. I cannot wait to read part 4. You should definitely make this into a book. I would so read it. You ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: In 24 Hours
Very interesting. This story gives you a whole new point of view on the 'live life to the fullest' perspective that not a lot of people have seen before. It ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Soulmate
This really is a well written poem. It really shows that you care about your friend and vice versa.
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Ribbons
After reading the first few lines, I really began to be reminded of Serena from Sailor Moon and how Darien broke her heart. It was a very good poem.
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Deleted due to lack of quality
Very detailed. But at certain points, I felt that there was a little bit of confusion. It seemed like you were switching your point of view from 1st to 3rd, ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: A pack of friends and foes
Your intro was very good. Good detail. There are a few typos here and there. At certain points, I felt sort of confused, like who she was talking to. But ...
Jun 12, 2009