Amaryllis

Thank you for the replies, guys! I'm glad you both like it, and I'm happy to see such a nice response to it (this is the third and last draft ...

It does make it a lot easier to know history; I just took AP US History last year and it ate my brain, so hopefully that will make my history-making-up ...

Thanks for reading! For the political mumbo-jumbo... My reasoning for that is that this is a different universe than ours. You'll find out later that there has been a plot ...

Wow! Thank you so much! That was the most epic review of my life, and it made me smile! I'm glad you liked it so much.

Omigosh I like this. It's short, but it ends with a sort of "thwack" sound. It sticks in your mind.

Yay! Thank you for reading it! As it was first coming out of my head (I write everything longhand before I type it), I thought that it was really bad, ...

I agree that it didn't have much meaning, it was just kind of a flippant thing I wrote back when I was in middle school. But I thought it was ...

Thank you for catching all my grammatical missteps and reading it...I write it longhand and then edit it as I type, but I am bound to miss things. I typed ...

It was...interesting. But I think it would be better and easier to read, as stated above, if it wasn't all in caps lock. Some spacing would be nice too, so ...

Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you liked it!

That's good that there's a conflict in part 2, but to make people want to read part two in the first place, some of the conflict should be introduced in ...

Thanks! This was kind of a personal poem for me to post on an online forum, but I'm glad I did. It at least helped things get off my chest ...