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Ambrose1234

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spear of Justice

    Spear of Justice is actually the title of the song that plays when you fight Undyne in the pacifist or neutral routes.

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I Hear The Choir Singing

    Hello! how are you doing today? Well, I found this poem very interesting. Don't get me wrong, I did like the poem, but the setting I find interesting. you speak ...

    Dec 19, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Angel's Home

    no problem! I find that, if you want to get reviews, you have to advertise towards the right audience, possibly even putting yourself out there for others to see. I ...

    Dec 15, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Heir of Asratoil Prologue

    oops I didn't see the novel/chapter lol I'm bad at this sorry.

    Dec 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: holidays

    Overall, good poem! I really like how you used symbols to substitute letters. The formatting is very interesting. I don't have any criticisms I could make, and the way the ...

    Dec 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Horror Re: It Waits

    Howdy! I'm gonna be doing a review: My my, so much to go over... Where to start? The pacing. The pacing is absolutely perfect. having separate paragraphs is really important, ...

    Dec 10, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When the World Ends (aka: a love letter to friendship)

    Thanks. I don't really know what else to say. It's not that I've been seperated from my friend, but I do feel as if I don't see them enough. They ...

    Dec 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: See Through Closet (a poem about the desire to come out.)

    Blue hair and pronouns! lol, sorry... I'm not good at this.

    Dec 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Dust and Echoes

    Thanks. The story was kinda rushed, if I'm being honest. Ill probably make a story that is essentially this one, but different. I plan on using this setting for more ...

    Dec 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Dust and Echoes

    Chara is the nickname of my best friend. They have been there for me, and I for them. Thank you Chara, for helping me and keeping me alive.

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Other » General, General Re: withuimfound

    It's better than what Ive done lol

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Never again

    I don't have any way I could improve this. I'm sorry for what you're going through. But you will find someone. Even if it's just a close friend, you will ...

    Dec 7, 2024


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