AmeliaCogin

Hi! I'm not going to go into any great detail because Dianne and pinkshearwater have done great, thorough reviews! This was brilliant. I really, really did enjoy this and I ...

Hello! This poem is lovely! Very simplistic and beautiful! I love the whole innocence of the piece. I really connected with the poem. There was few gramatical mistakes. Here's a ...

Hi! I've havent got much time today but I'll try and post a proper review later and help you with an ending. For now, This was great! the sentences were ...

Hi! Just a quick review! I loved this poem. You use some beautiful adjectives and compelling images. Lovely! No gramatical or spelling errors to speak of. Pretty perfect! I have ...

Hi! First of all, WELCOME! Hope you love it here! I'll be reviewing you work. OK, so: I really, really loved this poem. It was deep, soulful, dramtic, very compelling ...

Hi! I'll be doing a quick review of your poem! First of all, I really did like it. It was soulful and well-written, though I do feel you over-prosed a ...

Hi! Just a quick review! I really liked this piece! I may have time for a proper review later! Right now, I thought 'screams of thunder' was very, very good. ...

Hi! I really loved this poem. It was uncomprehendingly hypnotic. I didn't really care that half the time I had no idea what you were taking about. lol. It was ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem. I like the concept of the poem, although I tend to use the expression 'one of those days' when something bad's happened - for ...

Hi! Just a really quick review! I liked your poem. It was quirky and humourous and whitty and coy. I've exhausted all the descriptive words I can muster regarding this ...

Hi! First of all, I like your story. I agree with everything dreamwalker said - you have made many gramatical errors and you often repeat the same words in one ...

Hello! I liked this poem. It's very deep, and I had to read it a few times to take it all in. I loved just how poetic it was. Not ...

Hi! I like your poem alot! Soulful, In one word. Here's a nitpick! lol Dark Raven In the Darkness, - you've already described the raven as dark - don't say ...

Hi! I LOVED this poem! so beautiful! It remined me of beauty and the beast with the rose petal ect. lol - you've brought the kid who loved disney back ...

Hi! First off: I really enjoyed this piece! I have to say, it was a little disjointed in some parts and many sentences seemed to go on forever, but strangely, ...