AmiiLightwood

Oh, Wow. I'm battling to find the words to describe my thoughts on this one - it is positively awe-inspiring, absolutely beautiful. Your vocabulary is nothing short of magnificent and ...

Good job! I liked this - it's very light and sweet. Very funny - and I can relate to it! Haha I'm still smiling =) Awesome!!! Two thumbs up! Amy

This is beautiful. Morbid, powerful, emotional... Amazing. I had tears in my eyes by the time I finished reading it. I love the title - that was what initially piqued ...

Ok, so I heard somewhere that too much raw emotion has the potential to put the reader off. Is there really such thing as too much emotion? Can a poem ...

Ahaha - mrpunctuation you've done it again. I thought it was hilarious =) The irony and the bad grammar just make it so much funnier. And yes, I do think ...

Hello there! I have to say I really like this. It is nice and simple and paints a good mental picture, particularly towards the end. I like the storyline although ...

This made me laugh :) Good job - very clever ;) AmiiLightwood

Hello there! I came across your poem while browsing and I have to say it's quite... unusual. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I do think that there a ...

Miss lolacherrycola!!! You told me you couldn't write!!! I love it - short and sweet and lovely. Perhaps TaylaChase was right about not needing those two words in the second ...

Jash..... Wow. Just wow. This is so peaceful and powerful - I absolutely love it. You have a beautiful, wonderful voice. The music is lovely and the lyrics are so ...

I love this! The ending is - although rather grim - fantastic. I have no spelling or grammar nitpicks for you, so good job! Absolutely brilliant.

I love this - it is woven together brilliantly. The rhyming is great and your wording is fantastic - meaningful, but not too heavy if you understand what I'm saying. ...

Wow. This is indeed quite a haunting piece, greg925, and is very well put together - It held my attention from start to finish. The first and second stanzas are ...

I. Love. This! Your piece is just beautiful. I love how different it is - it is like nothing i have ever read before and not in the slightest bit ...

naww i love you aniwinchester - for liking my totally nonsensical poetry :) what would i do without you?