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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I trip over sidewalks

    WOW, i really like your writing. it tells me an important sory- although i have a few suggestions. I trip over sidewalks, I trip over plants I trip over pebbles ...

    Mar 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: String Cheese

    This was written well! i love how the poem rhymes, and goes to with the flow. Would low-fat be okay? No, I would not mind. Because this healthy treat cannot ...

    Mar 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hand

    i found this written very well. The lines that stood out most to me were "My hand holds the mysteries of the future too. Something to become or to put ...

    Mar 11, 2009


I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
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