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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When The Cheese Attacked.

    Haha, well there's an interesting way of getting yourself to write! I need to get my friends to spit out something random for me O_O I liked it, It sounds ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The sky flashes Zeus’s golden lightning

    I really liked this one! The imagery you provided was just great. "The sun shyly searches amid the cloud." -I loved this line =) I enjoy reading your writing! Keep ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: you kill me

    This poem was very... blunt and straight-forward I must say, which I liked. I like how this character is ending their life, just to hurt somebody else's. It was pretty ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Just A Memory - short version

    This was very touching. It definitely sounds like an older person is saying this, you did a great job with the word choice. I especially liked the ending, it was ...

    Oct 6, 2008


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