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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thou Dost Not Compute

    I am amazed. Just purely amazed. I never thought people could describe love in a computer sense. I love how you describe romantic touches suche as And strokes on a ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem for school

    This poem has a pretty nice rhyming lines. I certainly love the message you conveyed. I love how you describe life and its struggle as well as you message of ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Story, Chapter One.

    I am struck in awe O.o Your story catch the attention of the reader and have plenty of suspense as well having a tense mood. I really like it. The ...

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part one

    Story was good and i like the mood you created in this part. However the first paragraph confuses me. Mostly on the second sentence “Where the hell is my new ...

    Apr 1, 2010


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