AndNeverAgainx3

1st picture: your dad's house, right? very pretty. 2nd: sepia and feet! me likey! 3rd: that's pretty much gorgeous. 4th: that one's my favorite 5th: was that the annoying kid ...

Please tell me what you think--too dramatic? Does it reel the reader in? Would YOU publish it? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE give me any suggestions. I'm not afraid of cruel responses. Here is ...