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AndreaMcD

  • I Am Your 1st Reviewist!!

    I think your poem is good but it could use some help. Some of the lines do not rhyme and some do not make since. The line with the boy ...

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    • Narrative
    1 min read


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart