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  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Thank you kindly. :)

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I hope these changes compliment your critiques. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Changed it up, as well as the others. Please tell me what you think. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Again, reviewed for your viewing pleasure. Hopefully these changes will allow for more complimenting aspects. :) Thank you for your sentiments and hopefully looking forward to publishing another soon.

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Appreciated. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Modest Impressions

    To the critiques of the many, I hope the restructuring of how this piece is to be spoken helps with the reading. :) A compliment to all those who gave ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Good afternoon Readers. To the contrary of structure I have reformed this piece so that may visualize as more a poem than a literary essay. :) I hope you find ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I appreciate kind to the praise. Thank you. :) And to answer your question the last two lines are accesss to the second stanza. Cut flowers being the lost art ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Of course, again appreciate the critique. I was thinking the same thing

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Thank you kindly. :) I'll consider the sentiment on structure.

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: The Lovebirds

    Of course. :)

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Indefinite Blue

    My review posted twice, but i guess all great things come in pairs right? Haha, have a good one

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    A fan of Lessing! :D It's not everyday he is brought up on casual conversation, so the sentiment is even more moving. Thank you. :)

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I will give you just credit that free verse isn't the stereotypical structural pretense we give to what poetry is. But I will say that to the narrative poet, free ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Modest Impressions

    I will kindly repair that typo, thank you. And again appreciate fully your remarks. I am glad you enjoyed this piece so thoroughly. Though I would not be so bold ...

    Mar 25, 2015


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)