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Re: Journal of All Things Little [1]
Hello Lauren! I'm Andromeda- here to critique your piece. Let's get on with it, shall we? :D Yeah, I said, cos somebody invented perfume. I like that you used perfume, ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Points Up for Grabs
I will! I'll give you.... Santa Clause! :D
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: The Studio.
Hi! I'm Andromeda, and I'll be critiquing your work today. ^^ The room it opened to was a memento in itself. Her drawings lined every inch of every wall, dying ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Mama's all that matters.
Hello! I'm Andromeda, here to review. :) The smell of burning wood fills the little girls [there should be an apostrophe after 'l' in 'girls' to make it look like ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Lavender Napkin Rings
Hello, Hannah! I'm Andromeda, here to critique your work today! “Should the napkins be lavender [there should be a comma here.] or this baby blue?” She holds the napkins up, ...
Jun 1, 2009