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Andromeda

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Journal of All Things Little [1]

    Hello Lauren! I'm Andromeda- here to critique your piece. Let's get on with it, shall we? :D Yeah, I said, cos somebody invented perfume. I like that you used perfume, ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Studio.

    Hi! I'm Andromeda, and I'll be critiquing your work today. ^^ The room it opened to was a memento in itself. Her drawings lined every inch of every wall, dying ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mama's all that matters.

    Hello! I'm Andromeda, here to review. :) The smell of burning wood fills the little girls [there should be an apostrophe after 'l' in 'girls' to make it look like ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lavender Napkin Rings

    Hello, Hannah! I'm Andromeda, here to critique your work today! “Should the napkins be lavender [there should be a comma here.] or this baby blue?” She holds the napkins up, ...

    Jun 1, 2009


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners