AneiDoru

I'll be going over my previous chapters with this new knowledge, nobody explained it quite as good as you did, so it will be an hour or so before I ...

I tried to do the best I could with the showing not telling, but there isn't really any way to show how someone feels, so I'm pretty much stuck.

Then what am I going to do? I don't understand what you are talking about, so I can't fix it.

You know what, I'm going to DM you the google doc of the story so you can comment on where to fix things, because you aren't telling me anything.

Can you tell me where to edit? You kind of tell me to fix things without telling me where.

I'll edit accordingly, thank you for the compliments!

No, you're fine, I'm glad you liked it!

I edited accordingly, if I missed any, please reply.

Ok, I will edit it accordingly.

Oh darn, I present tensed again! Thanks for the review, I'll be sure to edit accordingly!

stop posting twice, it's really annoying

You're being unreasonably mean about this, if you don't like it, don't read it.

Why did you post twice? Also, I'll remove the horror tag.

Also skyler is not a human, humans don't have black blood.

I'll be sure to edit tomorrow, but right now It's extremely late.