AneiDoru

I changed some stuff, hope it worked out.

The reason why I wanted to keep the waking up part was, if i didn't, what would the segue be? It would throw readers off, and I don't want to ...

I always have them doing something though, I don't understand why you still have a problem with this. Please point out to me the exact unnecessary dialogue tags so I ...

I can't remove the drive there, because what she's feeling and thinking is important, and I can't remove her waking up, it would be too much of a jump. I ...

I'm going to include how she's feeling after Skyler walks in in the new chapter, that's the point of a cliffhanger, to hold back information for the next chapter. I ...

I went through with a spell checker and didn't find any bad grammar, can you point me to where it is?

I'm glad you liked it! I think I put as much as I could into describing things, thank you for your review!

No, you reviewed perfectly, I said capitol instead of capital, thank you for helping me out with that. I hope my edits are to you liking, have a great day!

You made a lot of sense, and I singled out some of the stuff you told me to change. You were right that I had a misspelling and wrong punctuation ...

Sorry for the long wait, was busy with my own story, hope you have a good day too!

'he was into rasors' should be 'he was into razors , 'Russ had commited the code to memory' should be 'Russ had committed the code to memory' Those were the ...

Also I did the spacing thing everyone was wanting me to do. I hope that makes it easier for you to read.

I added more descriptions and was more specific in certain areas (someone else pointed it out to me) hope it's better than it was :)

I added a few descriptions and edited things accordingly, I hope it's to your liking. :)

I guess I didn't fix the Ms in the last chapter on here, please note that I have multiple places that I post, also it may have been updated by ...