Angel17

This is a very sweet start! i liked it a lot

This was really funny. This is how i'd imagine stuck up people would think!

I like the advice in some stanza's followed with a rhyme. It was a good poem.

Nice! I really liked this one, great flow

WOW, I can imagine saying that to some people! Good job

Wow...well written. I agree!

Beautiful poem. The last stanza flowed very nicely. Loved it. :D

I really like this. Both parts are equally great. Everything is really realistic and every moment was described in detail giving the reader a lot of imagery from this. Can't ...

awwwwwwwww that was so nice to read!! :D

i like the varied pace. Its slow until the end and then speeds up, it added more of an effect. Also; lullabye should be lullaby.

Three words; SHORT,SWEET, BEAUTIFUL! Great images created.

I think because your poem was short, it made it better. This was great my favourite part was To put the world back To bed This line was a really ...

Firstly rythem should be rhythm Right's should be rights and let's should be lets. Otherwise it means right is and let is. Overall, great imagery, i thought your poem was ...

A few mistakes; and my thoughts of you i'll never tell Needs an apostrophe Maybe this line would sound better if you wrote i will never; rather than i'll. Just ...

I love it. But honey let me share the truth, My pen bleeds my heart and soul These are my favourite lines. Good job!