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Re: The Unexpected
Unexpected, there you were in front of me. Unexpected, we crossed each others ways just in time to see. Unexpected, it all had happened so fast. I just wish I ...
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: Hope Pt. 1 & 2
The first part was good, but the second part was the best. I loved it. My favourite lines were Everybody says they know Yet no one knows at all There ...
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: Rhyme Tyme
Hand (does that rhyme, i'm not sure)
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: Change One Letter
deed
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: This word reminds me of...
Feet
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: I'm the Guy
i loved it. If you make the changes the others suggested then the poem will run smoother. :D
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: Best Friends?
I liked it. It had a basic rhythm to it :D
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: -untitled-
I don't think its dramatic but i really liked it. I think it fits Lyrical poetry more. But Good work. :D
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: disconnected
It was like a converstion or a story. I liked it alot. :thumb:
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Snow...(flakes)
Three words, Short, Sweet and Simple . Nice work! :)
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Angels
It was a simple poem. It was okay but maybe you could create some imagery. :D Welcome to YWS, hope you like the site.
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Make Believe
I love it. I can completely relate to it. It was beautiful. Wonderful work! :D
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: Blue Eyed Boy
I liked it. i also agree it sounded like a song. This was a good thing, i liked the rhythm it had. It had powerful images of blue eyes. You’d ...
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: In The Cold
I really liked it. A lot of emotion and nice imagery. You stand so close to me, yet An infinity of this frozen time lies between us. These were the ...
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: Freedom's Price
Excellent. A beautiful piece of writing :D
Nov 30, 2005