AngelKnight900

This actually made me cry and I feel her pain because not everyone can get over someone they loved. I feel so much empathy towards her except the boy I ...

Wow...I actually think your idea of making such a novel is actually very good. My spanish teacher taught me something about how students participate in class. He said that most ...

Yikes! I actually read a book like this called Winter Girls , by Laurie Halse Anderson. You should use that book for reference if you haven't read it already. Usually ...

I hear something......wait....wait....wait. Oh yes....Resident Evil!!! It really reminded me of Resident Evil even though the hero of the movie is a girl. This is actually very good and for ...

This is actually very good. I was actually a bit confused because I read journal entry #2 the other day but I see your doesn't really resemble a journal format ...

Like the others, this chapter is 공상적인, 환상적인 (that's Korean for fantastic...well google translate gave me tons of translations so I picked the first one) . What I will note ...

Hahaha basically everything will be explained later on

This is a really good chapter. I was seriously waiting for you to write/submit chapter two and this is a great success. One thing I will say is that it's ...

Again, you don't cease to impress me. This is actually very good and I'm so interested in who's story was that. One thing I will comment on though.... and here ...

I wish I could like this a million times but just like elections.....you can only vote once. This chapter is astounding. It caught my attention and kept it throughout. There ...

Hahahaha this is nice :D I don't know what happened but I probably set a really high standard in my it wasn't as good as I expected...sorry to say (please ...

This is my longest chapter by far, I believe. I just kept on writing and writing and writing. There was so much I wanted to say in this chapter. Please ...

This chapter is very good. I'm very interested in your novel because it seems to be one of those novels that really teach you a good life lesson. I hope ...

This is a really interesting chapter and I can't wait to read more of your chapters. I'm very interested about this woman and this mysterious Starry Hill. This makes me ...

This is a really good first chapter. It caught my attention and I held it. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your chapters and possibly other works. Keep ...