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Re: Show Them Who's Boss
Emotionally abused. That was how I was when I was with Mario. One day he would want me and another day he wouldn't. Constantly treating me like a yo-yo that ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: The Sharing In Power
Hmmm I'm interested in this story but I think that this little explanation of the story could just be used for the novel's profile and placed where the plot is ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Demon of the Sea:Chapter 6
It's been such a long time since I read this that I actually almost forget what the story was about but I managed to get a recap. So far it's ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: The Puzzle
Hmm....this really got me thinking so as I write this, I can't really just post an opinion about it right off the bat. I feel a lot of happiness in ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Saved
Oh Ok because I was a little sad. I was like T_T why does it have to end so fast. I like it so more but I'm not in total ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: And You Said I Couldn't Do It
Mindy Kay was my best friend or so I thought. I watched her at her table across the cafeteria and I start to wonder what ever happened to us. Mindy ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: The Truth
I got one word for this. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Okay, I'm going to be serious now. This was very well-written and you instantly grabbed my attention. This was soooo wonderful but
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Let this moment last forever
I'm a sucker for love poems and love songs. I think most people are and I think that people can make the most corniest poems ever but I think this ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: The Sound of Thunder that Came too Late
Wow this really spiked my curiosity. I liked how your title came in your story and it fit in with the novel. Most authors, upon introducing their story's title in ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker:Chapter Eleven
Winter vacation was like heaven to me. I just didn't want to go to school and see all those faces, looking at me, judging me. Even though it may seem ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: My Twin Towers
I didn't expect to see my daughter to be a firewoman but here she was. In the back, sitting here with us, playing Poker. Her twin brother Jeff, was a ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: 9/11/2001
I like this poem but I think you can extend it a little more. Like there is so much to talk about so I think you could make it longer ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: The Twin Towers
This was really good and it's good to know I'm not the only one willing to do such a story. What I will note is that it goes a little ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter Two)
This really spiked my curiosity and even though to me it was a little short, it was still good enough for it to be acceptable which is very hard to ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: One down, another barely standing.
I had no idea what subject to put this in because this is like placed ten years ago so I think that's a little recent to be historical but I ...
Sep 10, 2011