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Re: Clique Breaker:Chapter Two
Hahahaha thanks for pointing that out. I never noticed that. Thanks for the advice
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 1
I'm not sure with those bits of paragraphs. If you're trying to teach a lesson in your story don't give them out in one chapter. Try to shorten it by ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Stay in School!
I like the poem. I got to agree it isn't as complex as I thought it would be but then you were bored. Good job :D
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Dead Broke -- Chapter 1: Part 1
I'm not that experienced a writer but so far it's actually a good chapter. The part about the clocks kind of sounds a little awkward but other than that it's ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One
This is really good. Keep writing :)
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: My So-Called Half-Blooded Vampyre Life ; Intro and Chp. 1
I love it actually. Keep writing because its starting off good but if you want it to be more than good keep writing and try not to settle for "good". ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker
wow thanks. You made this more interesting. Thanks for the help :)
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Robin Goodfellow and the Arms of Azrael Chapter 2
I love the last sentence. It caught my attention. All of it is amazing but that one last sentence was like icing on the cake
Jul 8, 2011