Angela

I love this! I have no idea how you would cut it down. This is a wonderful essay, and I don't know how you could bear to cut it down. ...

OMFG this is great since we are reading Romeo and Juliet in class and this is EPIC! I kind of want to send this link to the teacher. I think ...

Thanks very much to you all! I really enjoyed writing this scene, and I'm happy you had fun reading it.

Absolutely LOVED it. Funniest thing I've read today. You should try reading 'The Book Thief' by Markus Zusak. Anyone who writes this HAS to read that book. Anyway, I love ...

Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews!

To everyone asking about Alec: I'M SORRY. I went in to change his name and was in a hurry and must have missed a few. So here it is... ALEC=REMINGTON=ALEC. ...

Thanks to everyone for your reviews! Yeah, I was pretty sad/depressed when I wrote this, and I was curious how the emotion would filter through and affect the reviews. Thanks ...

Thank you to everyone for your wondrous reviews!!!

This seems to have the makings of a very good story. Keep writing!

I thought it was a pretty good poem. I understand it and believe me, I have already ended up living like that.

I have to say, I really don't know how in the world the trees fit into the jealously. Everyone else is saying my thoughts, so just read all that. I've ...

A very good poem. Good theme, and the imagery of it was very good. My only suggestion as that the placing of 'china' seem a little bit repetitive, or messy. ...

I don't read much poetry, but I thought this was very good, and quite enjoyable to read in a sort of melancholy way. Love it all!

I really don't have any critique. This was really good. You did the exposition-via-dialogue spectacularly. Is there any more to this? Can you post it?

Love this story! So right. I didn't see anything. Perhaps, in the beginning, the word 'spheres' gets a little repetive. Maybe you would like to substitute 'globes of ethereal magnificence'? ...