Angelorchid

Hey! This is a great story! It gave me the shivers, quite realistic...the image you crated is vivid and perfect for the story.The reactions and emotions were spot-on. Great work...Looking ...

Welcome to YWS! I found this story fascinating. Especially the name, "Snapshots of life". The name itself holds a deep meaning behind it and it intrigued me. And the way ...

Its definitely a very touching piece of writing. The story portrays a deep sorrow behind it and the love for the author's mum. It displays true emotion, so vivid and ...

Hey, First of all, wow, I loved it. The title just hooked me to the story. I held onto every word. And the story is just outstanding. The dream was ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. Gave me a good laugh. I wish i could pull such a prank on my sibling but i can't. I am much too scared ...

Hey there I really enjoyed reading this story although i could use some details to go with it. It was obvious that this was the girl's first time so maybe ...

A breathtaking story. Its beautiful how to described the friendship. Although you could make it better by adding details to it. Work on it. Nevertheless, it was a good read.

Hey, The message that you wanted to convey through this story was vivid and it actually compelled me to imagine myself in your place. The thought of being along is ...

Hello Malavika. I must say this is a beautiful piece of writing. The bond between the ribbon and the author added a tinge of authenticity to the whole concept. Also ...