Angelorchid

Actually there's another part to the story. Anyways, thanks for your suggestions.

Well it happened in real whether you believe it or not. But yes there's more to the story. Anyways thanks for your comment.

Thank you for taking the time to review my story! :)

Hey! I love your story! The dialogues, the emotions, the feeling of being in love and the complications often following a long distance relationship is beautifully written! Good job

Hey catnip! I just across this and I would say I like where this is heading. This is a very brief bio so the idea isn't all that clear but ...

Hey catnip! I just across this and I would say I like where this is heading. This is a very brief bio so the idea isn't all that clear but ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and it really pleases me to know that u liked it. Thanks a bunch! :)

Thanks a lot for your feedback. I'll proof read it from now on. You are right, this is not the first chapter. There's more to it. :)

Awww, this is quite an adorable poem. The fact that you took out the time to write a poem and mark this special occasion shows how much she means to ...

Thanks Auxiira for your awesome suggestions! :)

Hey, wow thanks for your comment! It's very encouraging and I hope you'll read the second part. :)

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Hey alf! Thanks a bunch for this. I really appreciate it. :)

Thanks for your review. Here's the link to part one :)

Hey, This is a great poem. The words are strong and creates a vivid image in the reader's mind. You have a way with words. Great work. :)