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Hey Speedy! Here as you asked. As you said, it was a spur of the moment thing so I won't go to the part where I don't know what's behind ...

Hey Aelita! Reviewing one of your works again. This was ... whoa. Again, your writing style hooked me in, along with your amazing descriptions. There is a beautiful flow to ...

Hey there! This was a nice dystopian read. The concept of the world without music is really good and I like the way you've presented it. Your descriptions and conversations ...

Hey Ben! Nice story there. I really like your writing style and how you've introduced the characters into the story. You haven't rushed it; with enough descriptions and dialog in ...

Hi there! Here to review~ It was a nice story. The idea was also nice and I liked your descriptions. I'm guessing that the woman he loved died in and ...

Hey Lily! Here to review~ I really liked your idea and the way you ended the poem. Though at times I did feel that some of the lines were were ...

Hey South! Nice story there. It's original. I like the idea and the way you portrayed it. You were really direct and got me really in with your starting sentence. ...

Hey! Here to review~ First hing that struck me was the voice you used. It has a feel to, a bit like classics to me, which I like. For some ...

Hey Alfonso! Here to review~ I loved it. Your idea was amazing, and the was you portrayed it even better. Your opening sentence makes it really hard for the reader ...

Hi there! Here to review! I really like this piece. Your choice of word was quite good. And most of all, your beginning really pulled me in. People often don't ...

Review!~ It's a nice poem. Your choice of word was good and you conveyed your ideas nicely. What I didn't like was that in some places the flow just sort ...

I like this poem a lot! It's more of a riddle like you said. There isn't a proper flow or rhythm to this piece though. I would, if I could, ...

Hi!~ I really like your poem. It's so original and the idea behind it is impressive. I like how you portrayed it. I

Hey! I shall try and help as much as I can. I like your overall plot, an interesting topic. I also like how you're trying to approach and show it, ...

Hi! ~Here to review Like you said, this was a emotional poem. You conveyed your emotions through it quite well. The flow was good, not wavering at any point. Also, ...