AngusMacdonald

I'm sorry, I think the idea is good, but the rhyming scheme is at times a bit average, and it seems as if you were trying to rhyme some things ...

I think it's certainly very heartfelt, and that is clearly evident in your writing. I like the principle of the story, and I can relate to it a bit, but ...

A wise old friend of mine once said very confidently, "If dancing were any easier it would be called football." I think maybe you should write it down for future ...

It's amazing how much of a story you tell in just two stanzas. It's not necessarily a complex poem, but it's delivered with such intensity that you transform these eight ...

I love how you use language to convey your message. The language and structure is a tad confusing at times, and I did struggle on my first read, but when ...