AnimalQueen

Hi, BlueAfrica! AnimalQueen here! I gotta say, this is really a good poem. I love that it's about nature, and I especially liked the line: "but the way you miss ...

AnimalQueen here! First off, I'd just like to say your sister is amazing at poetry and she could definitely build a career off it. I love her use of words, ...

Wow! I really like your idea here. It's very different and unique from what I've read so far. To be good, a story has to have a big problem, and ...

AnimalQueen here! I always love reading about other countries, and this was no different! I know India has a lot of problems, so I was glad the chairman took charge ...

AnimalQueen here! So far so good. Really, I think you're doing well here. I can tell Tiana has a lot of sadness in her life. It sounds like there's a ...

As a huge mortal instruments fan, this poem really appealed to me. It's very rhythmic, and, I must say, accurate. Also, you described Clary's eyes as "as dark as ink." ...

This was an interesting chapter. Apart from the battle, I learned that Arka has very good, loyal friends. They give him courage to carry on. Also, he experiences mixed emotions. ...

Well, this brings back memories. When I was little, I was TERRIFIED of the dark. I wish I had seen it the way you did, though. I think it's true ...

I gotta say, you've already got me hooked on this story. I've always found nature and the elements very interesting. You didn't say where this was happening, but I have ...

Wow! Impressive! I like the plot here. Zoey, for one seems very hyper, not that that's a bad thing. She reminds me of my little sister. And Samantha sounds like ...

I like this. It makes you think. I can defiantly understand why a death row prisoner would long for death. I actually don't agree with excuetion. If a man kills ...

This is a beautiful poem. It sounds like it's written from the point of view of an immigrant. Is it? Your poem convoys a simple message. Wanting to belong. I ...

This a very good, and very, very true poem. A lot of people who claim to be religious are really just hypocrites. They preach love and forgiveness, then turn around ...

Well. That guy's scum!! I feel very bad for Anna-Maria. What is her boyfriend's name? I may have just not been reading carefully, but I didn't catch his name. I ...

This is a touching poem. It's sad, but it's beautiful because it's so true. We all just want to be accepted, like the person here. People don't like them because ...