Animia

Its a great theme and it is a really great poem! But it could be even greater if you redraft it with a different rhyme scheme.

I liked this poem a lot! It has great rhythm. I didn't like the last two lines though but everyone likes different things, right?

Great poem!! love the symbolism!

I love this poem and think that you used rythm really well. I love the story of the poem. I have to agree that maybe you could use better words ...