AnnMath

I've been trying to find a way to not use "I" so much and this helped me so much. I have a bad habit of doing "Dialogue," s/he says. All ...

I didn't give fear a gender because we fear things not people.

If people would like me to release entire chapters at once please tell me. From personal experience, I prefer to read small segments. AnnMath

Also, it's very difficult to tell a story with action if you're telling it from the perspective of someone who's blind. Again thanks. AnnMath

I'm releasing small segments of my work at a time. I realized my prologue in two sections and that wasn't very long. I'm probably going to do three or four ...

Hi, here's a review from me. I had a little bit of a hard time reading this. The construction of the stanzas was unusual. If you could explain the reasoning ...

I actually didn't think about the eyes being ironic and I didn't mean for it to be humorous. Usually, in scary books or movies, the characters only see the eyes ...

Hello, here's a review. I'm not a poet. I say that every time I review poetry. It's because I'm not and I don't want offend anyone. I liked the love ...

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Review I'm not a poet. Sorry in advance if I seem to know nothing of the subject because I know very little. It was a great piece of art. I ...

Reviews, reviews I'm not much of a poet, but I couldn't find the flow of the poem very easily. The words painted a nice picture, but reading them was more ...

Some review from a newbie. Hey! I personally believe it was good. I might be wrong however, because I really love futuristic world-ending type stories. I don't have anything negative ...

Here's some review for you. Okay, it's a great story. There were a few errors, though. "I lie there a thick substance grasping at my arm" I feel like this ...

A review's a comin'. I kind of like the way you took a happy seeming story and turned dark in a beautiful way. At first it seems somewhat inspirational, but ...

Hey, thanks so much for your input. It was very helpful an I hope to release the rest of the Prologue. I hope part two clears up a few things ...

Here's a review Okay, I thought you did a pretty good job overall. I didn't see anything wrong, and I enjoyed reliving my experiences with the Mario Bros. AnnMath