AnnaKarenina

I frankly haven't read a bigger load of rubbish in my entire life. Firstly, you mentioned the rhyme scheme, 'Your end rhyme pattern is absolutely horrible'. And why is this, ...

Thanks so much. I agree with your suggestions, and will do my best to fix up some of the parts. Thanks again for your review.

wow :) Thank you so much! Your interpretation about the slavery could easily be true, if the "Nelson" section wasn't included. :) Thanks so much again, and I'll try working ...

Amazing, as always, but then again, you know that. xx I love you too :*

I shalt! Volim te x

Thank you so much! It means a lot. It was exactly the kind of reaction that i was hoping to get :)

Thanks so much :) Great suggestions :)