Annapurna

Hello there! :D I really liked your poem it was really emotional and sad but I think I mainly love the metaphors and the meanings you have created within the ...

Hi there! :D Here's a review which I hope will help you! Firstly I will start with the pros: Well done! This is a very interesting piece of work with ...

Hi!!! :) I said I would take a look at your work so here I am! So sorry for not reviewing this sooner, my life has been a little busy ...

Hi there! :) I said I would look at your work so here I am! :D (sorry for the delay) Firstly I would like to say well done for creating ...

Hi there! :D This was really good! great for the prologue, I want to read more! I think something to work on could be your build up of suspense? Half ...

Hi there! I really liked this poem! :) I think you have done a great job with it! You have made the whole piece flow really smoothly, which can be ...

Hi there! Here's my quick review: I liked this, it is a very bold and poetic piece of work! I like that! :) I don't believe in Heaven or God ...

Hello there! Here is my short review: This was quite sweet, I liked how it was very subtle and clam but I think you may need to develop it a ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this, its a very good start and also I love your title! :) I'll begin by saying well done for creating a very believable ...

Hi there! I'd firstly like to say well done for creating such a gripping piece of work. I'm slightly stunned because I'm home alone right now and its pitch black ...

Hi there! :) I really like this poem, its very emotional and sounded quite sad, which shows that you are very good at conveying emotion within words, which not many ...

Hi there! :D This is a very captivating story! You've done a great job catching the audience's attention at the beginning! I like the detail and language you used and ...

Hi Ego :) I'm not the best at reviews but here's quickly what I thought: I usually don't like fantasy/action stories but I really enjoyed reading this! It was really ...

Hi! Annapurna here! :) Firstly I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading this; it is different and the story is very clever. I especially like the cliff ...

Hi! Annapurna here! Firstly I like the poem over all; I like your use of metaphors and the story you're telling. However half way through the poem you begin to ...