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AnneMarie96

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mike Fyler Ch. 2-3

    Oh my gosh! I had chills. This was amazing! I literaly could not find anything wrong with it! You are an amazing writer. I read the first part of this ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What I've Always Known

    Hey there!! I'm gonna try my hardest to give you helpful comments! I never thought that love could sneak up on you so fast and suck you in. I wasn't ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I love you

    Oh wow, the emotions in this story were mind-boggling. You took the reader through many differnet levels of emotions. Your story decribed the feelings that most people wish to feel ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Walk to Remember

    I like cheesy, sometimes it's just what people need! I liked your story, just because even if she didn't figure out how the boy felt, she still had that one ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Falling Sun 8

    Ohh wow, that was amazing. I read My Falling Sun 7. I'm assuming there is more I missed and I will have to go back and read. But so far ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Deleted Topic.

    I really liked this and I can't wait to read more. I can personally relate to this story. All of my best friends have ditched me for their 'reputations'. I ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: drama i guess

    Wow, I didn't expect that. There were a few gramar problems here and there but I am horrible at grammar so what do I know? I did love the thought ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: romance fiction

    Over all this was a very good plot. I don't quite understand why she kissed him when she just met him... but maybe I'm missing something. I can't really complain ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mike Fyler

    Uh, all I can say is wow. I absolutely enjoyed that. There was so much thought and details behind this. I loved it. I would reallllly like to read more. ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bikes and Books - Chapter One

    Wow, I usually don't like guy point of views but I really enjoyed this. He wasn't small minded like most guys. He actually put thought behind his actions. I think ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forgive and Forget

    This poem is very truthful and straight to the point. That's what this world needs more of these days. I am not going to lecture you about spelling and punctuation ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Falling Sun 7

    I thought the idea was amazing. I felt like I was there. I will admit the part about Jenny was odd but if she were to come back it would ...

    Jul 30, 2010


If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.
— Oscar Wilde