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I really like this. It flows very nicely and I love the simplicity. I could definitely feel the emotion, you did a very good job there. It's a great piece. ...

I like this, it has a great rhythm to it, I could hear it in my head. I would love to see the whole song once you finish it. Please ...

Hey there Very good song you got there. You are a very good writer. Everything flowed so well. The rhyme scheme used for this song was perfect. The rhythm was ...

Hi there General comments I really liked it. As the above comments said anyone who reads can relate to it. I can relate better because I am kind of in ...

Hi there I liked it. It's nice. General comments You might want to add on to it because it is a bit too short. I liked the mood of the ...

Nice try with the song. It is nice. General Things Blame that guy who ' s not to blame, And I cant find the reasons today... I like this little ...

You have a really nice topic and you expressed it in a very nice way. I love the topic about you wrote, no one actually writes on these kinds of ...

I really like the song. Just one question: Why is she so in love with him Why can’t she just let go She lies on her bed and she’s sobbing ...

Hey Carly. I like this song very much. It has a Good rhythm and good rhyme scheme. I was able to make a tune in my head, which is good. ...

Close your eyes under the sweet summer night! Fly away towards the sun, to the new day. Why is yesterday coming back like a new friend? Take off, drift away ...

OMG..this is perfect. I don't have words fro this poem. its simply awesome. Ans seeing that this happened to you in real life. OMG. I am so sorry. I was ...

What Happened by Hao Nguyen I look out the window and what do I see? I see the tall, towering trees. I see the dew-soaken grass. I hear the orchestra ...

You're my rain in a bottle ottle. Oh, oh, oh Keep me company, thats what you should do. I'll catch you falling from the sky, little droplets in my bottle. ...

I sit here and think of you And all the time I had was with you, But in the end it was all a waste. I think was will sound ...

Im left here alone, drowning in silence. But the words they dont come, im defying science. My tears they roll down, i cant seem to block them. My heart it ...