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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Teachers' Day

    [But there's more to teachers than just class and test. Part of our hearts are only for them for they are the best of the best.] I love how this ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Through the Smog

    Starting from here "To wheeze and cough with every breath, To feel my lungs rattle with every step, And the frail beating of my heart resonate through me Like a ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I'm Not

    I'll like to.give a review I like the feel of this poem "I'm not the one you're looking for. She's around the bend and through the door. I remember how ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Waiting for a Day That Will Never Come

    Starting from bottom again this poem is relatable always waiting on ideas "Waiting for a new idea to come, so I can be done, and walk outside to sit in ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: If I Ever Tried

    Starting from the bottom though this part was wow I 100 loved this part I can't say this enough "Now all I can do is try to survive, as I ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Eloise-The demented doll woman

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    Sep 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: the texture of flower petals

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    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 15

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    Sep 4, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To See You Again

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    Darkdav Critique story Inline Critique Change Type · Abandon 1½ A Little Bad for a Big Good (Part II) by Gidais (more) Tips for critting dismiss hint This text is ...

    Sep 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch.VI: The Du Murnaux Family 4

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