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Re: Teachers' Day
[But there's more to teachers than just class and test. Part of our hearts are only for them for they are the best of the best.] I love how this ...
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Re: Through the Smog
Starting from here "To wheeze and cough with every breath, To feel my lungs rattle with every step, And the frail beating of my heart resonate through me Like a ...
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Re: I'm Not
I'll like to.give a review I like the feel of this poem "I'm not the one you're looking for. She's around the bend and through the door. I remember how ...
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Re: Waiting for a Day That Will Never Come
Starting from bottom again this poem is relatable always waiting on ideas "Waiting for a new idea to come, so I can be done, and walk outside to sit in ...
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Re: If I Ever Tried
Starting from the bottom though this part was wow I 100 loved this part I can't say this enough "Now all I can do is try to survive, as I ...
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Re: Eloise-The demented doll woman
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Re: the texture of flower petals
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Re: Eclipse: Chapter 15
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Re: To See You Again
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Re: LoaMR: Ch.VI: The Du Murnaux Family 4
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