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This part...😶 This is a nice write up it is noon and the cicatrix on your birch bark heart has yet to disappear, with patience and without it. your heart ...

This story or whatever this is Is dope Felt like I'm reading your, diary and you're also telling me a story This part gave me a picture I appreciate this ...

This poem is ok though The comparisons are dope "The ant was towering over me with its feelers bulbous red. I saw a mountain in its eyes, black-light reflected, pale ...

[But there's more to teachers than just class and test. Part of our hearts are only for them for they are the best of the best.] I love how this ...

From here you talked about how she is keeping distamt from you "You’ve always walked away from me When the sun began to set We had our separate lives to ...

From here you talked about how she is keeping distamt from you "You’ve always walked away from me When the sun began to set We had our separate lives to ...

Starting from here "To wheeze and cough with every breath, To feel my lungs rattle with every step, And the frail beating of my heart resonate through me Like a ...

Starting from here "To wheeze and cough with every breath, To feel my lungs rattle with every step, And the frail beating of my heart resonate through me Like a ...

This poem is touching "A precious life So caring, beautiful Destroyed by a stroke of a knife" This part is very sad

This is good I don't know why I just appreciate the ghost in the mirror line and the last two lines very good

You really tried here ,this poem talks alot about shared moments it's really ok

Thanks imk I have a few coming would be glad to get your thoughts again on them

Yes lol But tell me what you think

You tried Check mine out pls

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