ArahniaSiddel

Three Rainbows Dancing In The Sky . . . The sky is black The air is green Rain pours down in sheets A battle rages far below Men are Yelling, ...

First I need to say I am NOT and artist. So disregard all my comments :) I don't like the hair it makes her look old. Her nose kind of ...

I am not an expert on poems so I am just some random reader. Ok, I love this. I want to see more of your writing. You may want to ...

Lions Park was about a half-mile from my house. After buying all the items on the list (I was very amazed that they even had the books), I rode my ...

I think this poem is wonderful. Even though it doesn't have a rhyming scheme you get the point across. Your stanzas don't have any flow, but you make it feel ...

O.k. I read this poem and I left with nothing but confusion. If there is some deep meaning to this poem I don't see it. I think you need to ...

Author's note: This is a little poem I thought of when I was riding in the car. I wrote it down because I'm sure everyone has had a bad meatloaf! ...

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm . . . .. .. ??? Whats the point of this?

Small, gray cloud Innocent, lethargic. Depending on your reader you might want to use an easier word. Sluggish perhaps. When I read this I am not sure who your reader ...

Thankyou again for all the help. Everything you say is true, and I will try you ideas. Maybe if I get Gimp I can make the other two pictures blury ...

Hmmmmmm, from what I can see I like it. It looks like you worked hard to make it, but in few strokes of the pencil. It does look like sort ...

I disagree with the others. I like the choppiness in some places, but in other places it would be good to make it more flowing. You don't have to make ...

I really like this peom, but I have a few comments in green. :) Poetry is like a Da Vinci painting. When you look you are immediately I would take ...

I love this! It shows pain without being do discriptive. It is simple and good. I need you, My painter of truth. I get why he/she needs this person, but ...

Thankyou for the advice right now I lost my camra, but I will probably find it soon. The first one is my favorite. Now that you say the problems with ...