ArcticMonkey

Yeah, I'm not sure what happened, I didn't mean for it to be one huge block of writing, but it has D: I'll try and fix it soon

Hiya! My deepest apologies for the lateness. I did read it on Thursday and now I've seen you've revised it xD. The review will still go on, and now I ...

Thank you for the review. I'm very sorry about all the typo's, and I've fixed quite a few of them, but I need to fix some more. So, everyone else ...

Thanks for all the feedback, and whoop, it's featured! @Felmzo I know that some things sound a bit off, I'm altering it so hopefully it will be better. Everyone else, ...

Thanks you guys, I didn't know that it was going to be this popular! Too be honest I was a lot better then at poetry than I am now so...

Thanks, I corrected it. I wrote this for a poetry competition but didn't have the guts to submit it.

Sorry about the evelyn emily thing. You see at first the character was called emily but then I changed it to evelyn. Sorry about that confusion, I'll definately change it ...

Yeah, I do have trouble with tenses. My English teacher said I wasn't using enough adjectives, then I kind of went over the top! Anyway, loved the review, it was ...

THIS WAS GREAT! laughed my head off and sang along! Great stuff I also liked your Tik Tok parody! ~Tamara x

Hello, I think the introduction is really cool, it uses very pretty language! C= I think to improve this, you should vary your punctuation using semi-colons (;) and hyphons (-). ...

Do you do your writing on an iPodTouch? That must take forever!!! Anyway, sorry my review wasn't that long, I'm not that good at writing reviews either! :P Again, loved ...

It was art homework, why I posted it here? I really don't know, it was fiction. I put it it Historical Fiction because it was set in the past. So ...

I have changed alot of things now, but still, it's not perfect. It's my first post so I'm not used to any of these things.