AriesBlaze8

Ahh, this made me so happy! Yes, I am working on part 2 of the chapter now. I'll post it up as soon as I feel it's ready :) Thanks ...

Thank you so much for the comments! It's super appreciated! 1). I never even thought about that...I'm editing the version on my computer and then updating all the edits all ...

Aaahhh, I appreciate the comment so much! You're right, I do need to go back and slow the dialogue down a bit. I have a tendency to attach emotions to ...

Oh jeez, I love this. It's open-ended and self-applying. Don't change a bit of it. It's the mystery of its meaning that makes it so memorable.