Armydah

Hi Birkhoff, Thanks a lot for the review and helping me point out all the areas that I need to work on. Am pretty new to writing short stories and ...

hehehe :D Thanks and you're welcome.

Hi, Happy Review day Thanks for the review. And to help with some clarification, this poem is actually a kind of reply to a poem written by another poet called ...

Thanks a lot for the review! I would try checking out the tense part as well. Thanks :D

Thanks a lot for the review. I would make sure to take into consideration all your suggestions. Thanks! :D

It was quite interesting, I would like to read the rest of it :)

Hi there, I read your review of the poem and it was quite well written and very detailed. But the part where you said 'faze' is 'phase' is actually incorrect. ...

Hi, thanks for the comment. But I am referring more to love in this poem. But everyone is free to interpret a poem in their own way. Its good to ...

thanks! :D

hi, thanks! :D

Thanks a lot for the insight! :)

Thank you very much for the great comment :D

Thanks! :D

Thanks! :D

Thank you!