Arouet

Hey there! I am Arouet and will be reviewing your story as just as I can. I enjoyed the story btw and the character is very colourful, well written dialogue. ...

Hey there! I'm Arouet and I will be giving a review on your story as just as I can. Hope this helps! Critique: -"unlicensed practitioner of whatever he did" I ...

Hey there! You definitely are a poet, you can see the experience and talent written in each word. Although I do have one recommendation: I would really enjoy reading what ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your Poem today as quick and as just as I possibly can. Now firstly with Critique: -"when you grow up, you learn things you never ...

Hey there, back again for the next review. I'm really enjoying the whole Gods and demi-gods vibe (perhaps you got inspiration from Percy Jackson?). But anyways, time for some critique. ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your story as swiftly and as just as I can. I really like the idea of the story but I just can't help but ...

Hey there! First of all this is a very nicely written poem and it reflects exactly how a lot of reading enthusiasts feel. Vellichor is the perfect title for this ...

Hey there! I'd like to give my critique on your story. So first of all, very fluid writing. I can easily follow the story and the characters. The characters are ...

Hey there! Since Pheonix there has done most of the work with the grammatical errors, I'll just add in my input. Sometimes your rhyming seems to be a little forced, ...

Once again Junel has taken first at correcting your grammatical and punctuation errors, so once again I will give my input. This is definitely my favourite chapter so far (excluding ...

Hey there! Since Junel managed to hit the nail on the head about the grammatical errors, I will only be giving my opinion. The chapters seem a little short to ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your work as just as I can. My critique: - "Earth, Milky Way Galaxy, Virgo Supercluster, Universe 1" as humorous as it may be to ...

Hey there! I'm here to point out flaws and potentially improve your strorytelling skills. -Thoughts should still be made in quotation. Examples: Perhaps I'll see Annabel tomorrow, I think. It ...

Hey there! A very morose poem, I understand that what you went through must not have been easy and sometimes life really is quite unfair. Sticking up for yourself is ...

Hey there! I'm Arouet and I'm here to review your post as just as possible. Some critique: -first sentence you wrote "I forced open the door, running out of the ...