Artecila

There's nothing wrong with being Tolkien-like, his style was world building rather then Epic fantasy. This is good, I liked it, but it seems so has everyone else in here. ...

They pulled that with us before to. No hard feelings, Openoffice is better anyways.

Thanks for the review! Just wanted to go into some author notes here, in case if I was too sparse on dropping hits for everyone to pick them up, and ...

Uh... what? Did I miss something or is this the entire story? If it is that was really awkward.

Do you really think that all of us are consistently adults acting 13-16? I mean how many people do you think could possibly be doing it, if everyone in this ...

I liked it, but it seemed a little harsh to put anyone in Hell because of their actions, and then to heaven because they were good. A strong Christian belief ...

This is very good, though I get all hung up on life and death myself, I can go on for hours and really mess myself up over just talking about ...

Thank you everyone, I edited it some to correct for the mistakes and will continue to do so. Thanks for the help. ^-^

Sounds like a good children's story. Would be great with a picture book. Its a little more advanced then 'Good night moon', but with a little fixing up for children. ...

I decided to contribute and post the first piece of Artecila. (From which my user name comes from.) While the prologue is rather long, I do hope it starts the ...

Rika and Brycius are bveing developed good, but I think you have a little too much emphasis on adjectives (and simple ones at that) to describe mundane things. Heavy breeze ...