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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Be still my Soul

    Hello! Thank you all very much for your opinions on my little poem, if we can actually call it that. I would especially like to thank Suzanne for her criticism ...

    Aug 23, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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