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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Terrible Secret

    I really liked this. Wasn't excpecting the friend to kill himself, so that was a twist. The ending was good, if a little vague. You could do with redrafting the ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Nerdy Obsession

    I really liked this! I agree with the other replies: you should add a bit more description of the characters but other than that it's brilliant. Can't wait to read ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dream Walker

    Hey! I really liked this but found it a bit confusing at the beggining. The story is a really difficult subject to write about but I really think you got ...

    May 12, 2009


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien