AspiringAuthorA..M.

Alright, I won't be an evil reviewer. At least, I hope not. Either way, here is what I have to say: *Um, yeah... that rhyme was not intentional . ;) ...

Banned for using the fact that your gender produces the offspring that keeps the human race from going extinct. What if pollution or some kind of mutated virus made women ...

Bah, bloody teenagers these days. I never talked like them. But I guess I should tone down the speech anyway. :) Oh, as for the sidekick's name, I had to ...

*Little off detail that reviewer pointed out was addressed* :P

Death and his Apprentice "Servants! It is time!" boomed God's voice from beyond time itself. "We were too late" Malqkwyt whispered. Death let the back end of his scythe thump ...

Have you ever met Stephen King?

Don't feel ashamed. :) I read the first few sentences, and stopped. The old style of writing just didn't appeal to me. :)

Oh hehe, I was kind of hoping I wouldn't have to be so graphic when it came to that. That's why I sort of just left those details small. But ...

No input? And hm, theres really no language here, and nothing rerally over the top. So I guess this could sort of be just rated 16, huh?

Hehe, you're going to kill off the sparklies too? I did that a long time ago. But it was more of a military story, of all things. *Shrugs* I made ...

Banned for not having seen one like taht either. I see now what it is. the "T"s are closed eyes, the stick is a trail of tears. :)

Banned for ending your post with two "t"s.

Fahrenheit 451 is a short, yet mesmerizing novel. Though I rather miss a certain charcter who dies way too early in the tale. It's sp sad. But the insane world ...

I'll just go ahead and use this post to put things about the content and structure of your piece. Here is an excample of something that I found a bit ...

*Like I stated, there is some suggestive things in this piece, but no language at all. It's all in the details. Oh and this piece has a sub-genre of Fantasy ...