AspiringAuthorA..M.

Welcome to my world. :(

Hey man, I'm going to have to put reading your book on hold for while. My drivers test is coming up, so I'm busy studying that, in addition I have ...

Darn, I really had trouble looking for mistakes in this. Not sure if I can say that it's making a review easy. :? Well, I think I'll skip the lengthy ...

Wait... if they were alive what would they use for food? :P

*No, bad thread! Stay in the current page!* Like to a misbehaving dog. :P

Immortality in a cruel world? Well, depends on how it would work. :? Immortal as in you just won't die ever, not even if the entire world is nuked? Well, ...

Sounds creepy. :D This storybook is dead right? I am so ending this. :P

The creator of this thread has my ambition as well! :twisted: :P I have always dreamed of being a film maker as well. Oh, but now it's closer than just ...

This looks like another dying storybook. May I end it's misery? :P

HA! I will order my pet chinchilla to execute those. :P *Get them Gabriel* The little gray animal pulls out a machine gun. :smt068

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Key to review: Blue: Things of interest, that need to be looked at or omitted. Of course the decision is up to you. Red: Means I moved it around, or ...

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This town is the very dwelling of hate and sadness. I hate living here so much!!! :smt021

I would like one please. :P Preferred Name to use: Adrian Favourite Colours: Dark blue, gray, and black Hobbies: Reading, writing, weight-lifting Favourite Books or Films: The Dark Knight, Disney's ...