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Re: Beast is Dead: Prolouge and Chapter 1
Writing about twins in this manner can be tricky. Since as you say they are identical, how is one judged as more attractive than the other? Of course since we're ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Helicopter Battle over the neighborhood
Thank you. :D -And as you know this is part of my book, which has been axed in half because of it's overwhelming length. It was already longer than the ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Essay-Help please!
I'm not sure which side I would take. Though I do think you make a great point by saying that an individual in power may abuse his authority to control ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Peoples Army-Chapter 1
As usual a lot of people beat me to the chase of pointing out a lot of the grammar and what not mistakes. So I think I'll just comment. Great ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: New 'Noveller' Allows People To Post Novels
sounds cool. :D
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: I dont get this...
Somewhere from the Eastern hemisphere. :D When it's night in America it's day over there, and vice versa.
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Fight for Life
The people before me beat me to the chase on a couple of things but... I have no time to lose. My strength is leaving me. I lunge. The wolf ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: I dont get this...
I only know one person here Bells. Don't feel too bad.
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Assassins Creed- Altair (part 1 full version)
I agree with the person above me Assassins Creed is a great game. I've been planning on buying the sequel soon. Although I'll miss Altair. :( Anyway I think you ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Average YWS Date of Birth (Updated)
You called me old. *Makes a sad face* Like this :(
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Jack-in-the-book (4)
Nice job. I've read from your first piece to here. But I can tell you that I am a bit disappointed that it seems like the whole story will now ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Jack-in-the-book (3)
Ink man is cool! But, I do hope that you don't just revolve the entire story around him. And I can't wait to see how you describe where the lunatic ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Jack-in-the-book (2)
Yeah, I know you heard this before by a previous poster, though he said it differently. The being so frightened that you can't move thing is one of the most ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Jack-in-the-book (1)
“The Lion Who Laid an Egg! You’re gonna love this, Jaden.” Is that a real book? If it is do tell me. :P And about the story itself. I like ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Twilight Parody(Gory Shocking Ending)Hunting Death
Marcus sprang forward and pulled out a cigarette lighter. "Sm0king kills," he said before dropping it on Emmet's headless body. Rosalie shrieked as her mates body was consumed in flame. ...
Jan 22, 2010
